Week 2 Task
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Week 2 Task
Hello Friends,
In this week's class we learnt the basics of writing skills. We discussed about word limitations in writing an essay or a letter. We learnt wordiness is a challenge for the students.
Wordiness is using more words than you need to in order to write what you mean. Everyone has a tendency to be too wordy at times.
This week exercise is about eliminating wordiness.
Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses. The first sentence has been done as an example.
He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.
Ans: He dropped out of school to support his family.
1. Students think that the most important subjects are those that will be useful after graduation.
2. Soon college fresher must realize that they need to contact their advisors about their choices of majors.
3. Our company provides opportunities for professional growth and stability in the dynamic field of aerospace technology.
4. There are people who are for and people who are against capital punishment.
5. Five out of more than a thousand students at a campus rally were arrested for disorderly conduct, and several others were charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without a permit.
In this week's class we learnt the basics of writing skills. We discussed about word limitations in writing an essay or a letter. We learnt wordiness is a challenge for the students.
Wordiness is using more words than you need to in order to write what you mean. Everyone has a tendency to be too wordy at times.
This week exercise is about eliminating wordiness.
Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses. The first sentence has been done as an example.
He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.
Ans: He dropped out of school to support his family.
1. Students think that the most important subjects are those that will be useful after graduation.
2. Soon college fresher must realize that they need to contact their advisors about their choices of majors.
3. Our company provides opportunities for professional growth and stability in the dynamic field of aerospace technology.
4. There are people who are for and people who are against capital punishment.
5. Five out of more than a thousand students at a campus rally were arrested for disorderly conduct, and several others were charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without a permit.
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1.students think that the important subjects will b usd aftr graduatn
2.soon clg freshrs need to cntct their advi
2.soon clg freshrs need to cntct their advi
manjari- Posts : 43
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2.soon clg freshers need to cntact their advisors for choices of majors
manjari- Posts : 43
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3.our cmpny provides opprtunities in dynamic field of aerospace technology
4.there r ppl who r for n aganst d capital punishmnt
5.in a campus rally few studnts wer arestd fo disordrly cnduct n many othrs wer chargd for organisng a public meetng witout permisn
4.there r ppl who r for n aganst d capital punishmnt
5.in a campus rally few studnts wer arestd fo disordrly cnduct n many othrs wer chargd for organisng a public meetng witout permisn
manjari- Posts : 43
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s!! I know many of my senior friends who where selected by their english communication..
Shreyas- Posts : 5
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Wat! These sentences r statd abve ! @shreyas
manjari- Posts : 43
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students think that important subjects are useful after graduation
mithunthon- Posts : 1
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Its are usd or wil b usd? I think wil b usd s crct
manjari- Posts : 43
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few students wer arrestd for disorderly conduct in a campus rally nd others for organising a public meetin without permit
nishaanthi- Posts : 7
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1.students think important subjects are needed in their life
2.the freshers must contact their advisors on selecting their majors
2.the freshers must contact their advisors on selecting their majors
abishek- Posts : 13
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Students think that important subjects are needed even after graduation.
Cris Ron Adwaith- Posts : 26
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2.College freshers need to contact their advisors for choices of their majors.
Cris Ron Adwaith- Posts : 26
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Many of our friends have problem in logging in the forum .....I think
Cris Ron Adwaith- Posts : 26
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the company provides opportunities for professional growth field of aerospace technology.
abishek- Posts : 13
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3.Our company provides professional growth opprtunities in dynamic field of aerospace technology.
Cris Ron Adwaith- Posts : 26
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yes the students aren't going to their mail address
abishek- Posts : 13
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there are people who are for and against the capital punishment
abishek- Posts : 13
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dont u think what this exercise improve in our language skill
abishek- Posts : 13
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among thousands, five students at a campus rally were arrested for disorderly conduct, and others were charged for organizing a public meeting without a permit
abishek- Posts : 13
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We should talk it short and simple .....thats y dude
Cris Ron Adwaith- Posts : 26
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