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Post by Admin Thu Jul 10, 2014 10:29 pm

Hello Friends,
In this week's class we learnt the basics of writing skills. We discussed about word limitations in writing an essay or a letter. We learnt wordiness is a challenge for the students.
Wordiness is using more words than you need to in order to write what you mean. Everyone has a tendency to be too wordy at times.

This week exercise is about eliminating wordiness.
Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses. The first sentence has been done as an example.

He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.
Ans: He dropped out of school to support his family.

1. Students think that the most important subjects are those that will be useful after graduation.
2. Soon college fresher must realize that they need to contact their advisors about their choices of majors.
3. Our company provides opportunities for professional growth and stability in the dynamic field of aerospace technology.
4. There are people who are for and people who are against capital punishment.
5. Five out of more than a thousand students at a campus rally were arrested for disorderly conduct, and several others were charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without a permit.

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Post by manjari Sat Jul 12, 2014 7:20 pm

1.students think that the important subjects will b usd aftr graduatn
2.soon clg freshrs need to cntct their advi

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Post by manjari Sat Jul 12, 2014 7:22 pm

2.soon clg freshers need to cntact their advisors for choices of majors

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Post by manjari Sat Jul 12, 2014 7:30 pm

3.our cmpny provides opprtunities in dynamic field of aerospace technology
4.there r ppl who r for n aganst d capital punishmnt
5.in a campus rally few studnts wer arestd fo disordrly cnduct n many othrs wer chargd for organisng a public meetng witout permisn

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Post by Shreyas Sat Jul 12, 2014 9:54 pm

s!! I know many of my senior friends who where selected by their english communication..

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Post by manjari Sun Jul 13, 2014 9:33 am

Wat! These sentences r statd abve ! @shreyas

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Post by mydileevijay Sun Jul 13, 2014 2:01 pm

Shld I repeat d same... Neutral

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Post by mithunthon Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:58 pm

students think that important subjects are useful after graduation

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Post by manjari Sun Jul 13, 2014 8:43 pm

Its are usd or wil b usd? I think wil b usd s crct

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Post by nishaanthi Mon Jul 14, 2014 8:31 pm

few students wer arrestd for disorderly conduct in a campus rally nd others for organising a public meetin without permit

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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:41 pm

1.students think important subjects are needed in their life
2.the freshers must contact their advisors on selecting their majors
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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:44 pm

Students think that important subjects are needed even after graduation.

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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:46 pm

hello cris

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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:48 pm

2.College freshers need to contact their advisors for choices of their majors.

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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:48 pm

Abi .....

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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:50 pm

Many of our friends have problem in logging in the forum .....I think

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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:52 pm

the company provides opportunities for professional growth field of aerospace technology.
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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:54 pm

3.Our company provides professional growth opprtunities in dynamic field of aerospace technology.

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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:56 pm

yes the students aren't going to their mail address
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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:58 pm

there are people who are for and against the capital punishment
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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:59 pm

I told the guys abt this

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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:01 pm

dont u think what this exercise improve in our language skill
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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:05 pm

among thousands, five students at a campus rally were arrested for disorderly conduct, and others were charged for organizing a public meeting without a permit
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Post by Cris Ron Adwaith Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:07 pm

We should talk it short and simple .....thats y dude

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Post by abishek Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:08 pm

thks
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